Snow Towards Evening by Melville Cane
Suddenly the sky turned gray
The day,
Which had been bitter and chill,
Grew soft and still.
Quietly
From some invisible blossoming tree
Millions of petals cool and white
Drifted and blew
Lifted and flew,
Fell with the falling night.
Read the above poem and comment on your thinking. These can be connections, visualizations, powerful words or questions about the author's purpose or word choices. Please comment by Friday, February 11.
19 comments:
Why did the athur wright about winter? i dont like winter becuase of how cold it is. The athur could of worte about spring or summer the most good times of the year.
Tasia C.
why did the author write about winter? It really has one sentence that is powerful meaning it say`s "Millions of pedals cool and white drifted and blew lifted and flew, fell with the falling night." that was good to say it has a lot of meaning.
Tristan Stanley in 1st period
p.s, thank you mrs.talbert
I think the poem is trying to say that the snow is cold
Roxanne P.
I think this poem as to do with the esents and grace of life. I've never said that before.
From Garrett J. W.
Why did he write it?
Buddy
I like how the author used the words drifted and belw and lifted and blew.
Logan s
my conection for the snow towards evening is that its all talking about snow and every second i read this poem its cold and snowy outside.
Sarah P.
i think this means that the snow is falling and that the petals were cool at night and the snow fell at night
shelly.hi
I think the author is saying that the snow is raining.
By Quincy B.
I THINK THAT ITS JUST SNOW AND ITS NOT SUCH A BIG DEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NAME:MADELYNE R. SOUTHARD
My thinking of the poem is this, the auther chose great words for this poem the big oak tree
Diego B.
i have a connection to this poem and like when we had our long snow breaks and snow all oner the ground
dwightw
It souded really good I loveit use good desicipt words sounds like awsome poem.
i didnt really like that poem i like funny poems better scary or sad poems i dont like i think their a waste of my time....
Gloria P.
I like how the author put his/her words because i like how he/she put "Millions of petals cool and white Drifted and blew Lifted and flew,".I also like how he/she put some rhyming words in he/she's poem.
i like snow because snow saves my life
kyle. $
i like snow
shelby G.
i have read about the snow flake poem in 3rd grade and i liked it then but it kinda getting old
Makayla k.
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